There are 196 countries ,
2,469,501 cities to visit and learn from.
Travelling is a good way to reach that point ,
finding new friends and places were you like to go as if you were in Disney World.
Katy was a 10 year old girl ,
living in most populated country in the world
Between her house straight , highways, and bridges ,
having a path to the other imaginary world,
walking in all days ,
greeting and having fun with the people around her,
carrying packages put them into a ship going threw the blue ocean sea.
But one day everything had a move.
Katy , woke up to get her yummy and tasty eggs in the morning ,
hearing disturbing noises that couldn’t let her it her breakfast.
Bridges , Paths and old roads were all gone ,
instead mechanical trains and cars were replaced lefting no past.
Paying money to travel , smoke allover her face , being kind of upset.
Katy couldn’t walk now her mom buyed a new car.
Traffic, Insults to people until they reach to their homes,
She couldn’t visit her grandmother again ,
no path no sidewalk , it was imposible.
Years passed along ,
Katy as a 20 year girl finally got a job ,
being a traveller spending her lifetime meeting and learning new cultures and traditions.
Having to suffer from airplanes to cars and from cars to bickes ,
But it was a tool a gift that god gave to her,
being able changing dependence to independence.
Having more security on her trips capturing those good moments transportation is leding to a better future.
Very nice story,
Like your topic and concept of “Katy and her life being changed”.
There were some spelling and grammar errors but that can always be fixed.
Good job😀